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Drowning in a Thousand Roses

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Drowning In A Thousand Black Roses

I can feel it in the air
The ambience is gone
The feelings of guilt and loss
I can see where I went wrong

I see you now
Happy with another man
When I let you down
I know I went wrong

Please tell me it's a lie
That everything is alright
Tell me I'm just a man
Who's made his mistakes

I'm drowning here
In my pity and my shame
For every mistake I've made
I'm drowning in a thousand black roses

I know I've talked about others
Higher than I talk about you
But nowadays I'm alone
And now, without you, I'm lost

I can't take it anymore
I'm losing my mind here
While you have people to console you
I'm left in lonely fears

I don't want it to end
I want you to say it's ok
That this is all a bad dream
And that you'll come back to me with open arms

Please tell me it's a lie
That everything is alright
Tell me I'm just a man
Who's made his mistakes

I'm drowning here
In my pity and my shame
For every mistake I've made
I'm drowning in a thousand black roses
my final attempt to get my ex to come back to me ended in failure, yet I have no intention of deleting this song. It's not my best, but it's not my worst either. I don't know. let me know what you guys think : P
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KeithEKimball's avatar
Very beautiful... I can't rhyme and got no rhythm, so I'm always impressed to see this kind of thing done well. :D